I asked the feedback of a couple of piers who also took the type module last year and who are also producing a publication. The comments were good but areas / points to look at were...
Maya Jane Coles
- Widows
- Lines under the titles of the pages need to be thinner and all the same size throughout the article because they are too heavy in comparison to the weighting of the text at the moment.
Audiojack
- Single starting lines on their own at the top of paragraphs on the biography page
Bakermat
- On the last page swap the layout around so the text is on the left page rather than the right to increase readability.
- Biography page 1; add an extra column in from the other page because it doesn't read very well at the moment.
General
- Check the readability of the article, does it flow from page to page, make sure that there isn't too much white space where it doesn't need to be.
- Make the gaps between the text and bottom of images the same and smaller
- Try and make sure the top and bottom of the pages all line up
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