I have gone through and edited all the points that were made in the feedback. I really helped to come back to the publication with a fresh eye as I started to see other areas that needed to be tweaked slightly that I hadn't noitced before.
I justified the colums as well throughout the article which has made a huge amount of difference. Some of the spreads have been kept the same, with minor changes, but others have changed drastically and are much better for it. Overall the article reads a lot smoother than it did before.
I have isolated the quote that before, was in between two columns of text, it reads much better and looks better.
I have swapped around the pages here and added in the logo of Audiojack's Label because when the article was printed out before I didn't feel there was enough on the page, especially considering it was the opening page to the article.
I have re-arranged the height, number and position of the columns so it is more readable, also I have removed the two lines at the two of the paragraphs that were slightly isolated.
I tried to keep this page as similar to the previous design as this was one of the pages I was happiest with.
I had a few problems trying to lay out the rest of the article, I had to swap the images around.
I have added in an extra column here to make it more readable, and shortened the height of them.
I have swapped the pages around, and isolated the quote so there is more text on the second of the pages, making the overall spread more balanced.
Overall I am very happy with the development of the publication. I have designed the contents page and just need to add in the advert for the app, the advert for the music blog and the ad for the next issue with an image of the chosen cover design.